qirrat awan

Caught my sight one fortunate night the beauty i never saw , One needed a heart to see it, not those orbs you hold, One needed a soul to believe ...

Wind blew in every direction where it could reach, Earth was carpeted with leaves so dried ,so dead ,so lifeless . Trees were bend in grief , And sky was ...

It was a nice one 1 and informative too but somehow it is not that bright i think! it needs to be a little bright in a sense it should ...

great job ! i guess the you started with a little fidgeting but recovered down the way! its lovely to read something like that because it reminds of love lives ...

OK! I am not a very wise person neither am i a friend but if you need help than i think you can use my advice! See searching for a ...

hey its great! i uh.... i am not a teacher and cant really tell about your mistakes because i didn't find any i thought like i was watching a video ...

Heart beats high, Chest overflowed with ungracious grief , Sweat and tears rolling down the temple, Thoughts rioting as if war has started already, No matter the sky is quiescent ...

You know you did a fantastic job here! the reply above about rhyming and Not fitting words! well i don't agree with that because rhyming or no rhyming your composition ...